18 Mart 2010 Perşembe

THE EFFECTS OF ENTERİNG A UNİVERSİTY

Entering a university and taking education are very important and interesting experiences in a person's life.However, this experience will develop and change your life and personality forever.Maybe, then you will be formed really.The purpose of my essay is to discuss the some effects of entering a university.First of all, I want to say that university is an environment which a lot of people take place in.And this environment occurs in the course of time.New friends is acquired.Maybe your best friends in high school aren't anymore and maybe you are sad but you can acquire new friends who can understand you in the future.This isn't quickly maybe but it will.Being a junior high or at high school is completely different than being in a university, so you have to learn how to survive in.Second effect of entering a university, maybe you are far away from parents and you have to survive on one's own.Namely, you are a responsible person anymore.During university, as a result you will be in charge of your life and of the decisions that is the best for you.Entering a universty can be terrible at first but maybe a little bit of effort , it can be one of the best experiences of our life.And we must live this experience together.

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  1. hı merve, your essay is effective but of course there are some grammatıcal errors for example "you are a responsıble person anymore", at the begınnıg of essay "entering a unıversty and takıng educatıon is a very important" lıke that. you should be more careful but I lıked your essay.. see you:)

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