Earthquakes arises suddeny because of breaking of crust of earth.And they shakes earth's surface world by spreading in the state of wave.A lot of earthquake occur in top crust in 12 metres depth of earth's surface first occur in there.If it is intense, it is felt immediately.In my hometown earthquake happened and happens.I remember that a very intense earthquake happened in my hometown last year.
I was in high school last year.I got up early to go to the school in the morning.And I was dressing up, our house shook intensely suddenly.And I frightened and went to the near of my mother and father.They said to me earthquake was very intense .Basically all of us had frightened but we treated as usual.My father went to the his office and I went to the my school Earthquakes can conclude in death.And in the late a lot of people died because of very intense earthquakes already.Buildings suffered a lot of harm also.Maybe a lot of people hadn't a home anymore.Because their home was ruin and all in pieces.
OK.I didn't experienced such intense earthquake but I saw how an earthquake happened.The earthquake that we experienced last year was as intense as it didn't be before and I didn't see.
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Dear Merve,
YanıtlaSilThis is quite an interesting essay but it can be improved. See my points I made in parantheses for possible correction of grammatical points. You can also improve the whole essay by reconsidering all the paragraphs.
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"Earthquakes arises(???) suddeny because of breaking of crust of earth.And they shakes(???) earth's surface world by spreading in the state of wave.A lot of earthquake(s) occur in top crust in 12 metres depth of earth's surface first occur (in) there.If it is intense, it is felt immediately.In my hometown earthquake happened and happens.I remember that a very intense earthquake happened in my hometown last year.
I was in high school last year.I got up early to go to the(??) school in the morning.And I was dressing up, our house shook intensely suddenly.And I (???) frightened and went ???to the near of my mother and father.They said to me earthquake was very intense .Basically all of us had(??) frightened but we treated(???) as usual.My father went to the his office and I went to the(???) my school Earthquakes(???) can conclude in death.And in the late a lot of people died because of very intense earthquakes already.Buildings suffered a lot of harm also.Maybe a lot of people hadn't a home anymore.Because their home was ruin(???) and all in pieces.
OK.I didn't experienced(???) such intense earthquake but I saw how an earthquake happened.The earthquake that we experienced last year was as intense as it didn't be before and I didn't see(???).
hi honey! your topic is frightening for me like you:(you made some mistakes, some gramatical mistakes.for example earhquakes arises.. don't worry about:)
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